Feedback to Learner
You have got provided some details that are good your reading/writing life. Your English is great, however you involve some small mistakes. Your essay gains focus and power because it continues on. The start is really a bit disorganized, but by the end there is the wind in your sails.
To revise this essay for the profile during the final end for the semester you will need to think of developing your paragraphs. You will like to correct any errors that are grammar. Good work.
For the modification, I made the decision to consider the Professor Hays responses. I included information that is relevant took out unneeded terms. We seemed through each and every yellow reviews to react to each feedback. We corrected fragments and run-ons.
The Journey of my writing life
I really don’t remember what I first published or the very first book We read but just what i actually do keep in mind is the fact that We hated reading while growing up. We wasn’t a fan that is big of and my mother always forced us to learn. She constantly promised me personally such a thing if we choose to read to her. I had been a timid girl that is little would not talk that much. I am able to remember that when I joined into my teenage years We began to read more. Senior high school had been once I actually got into reading so I read lot of books and published a great deal. My English instructor in senior high school made me enjoy reading. Continue reading “My Journey As A author”